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Thân mời các bạn tham gia bài số 3 tại:
http://bachngocsach.com/forum/threads/10386/page-10#post-902189
Dịch bài hát thì có thể hơi khó đối với người chưa tự tin vào English. Bởi vì, ca từ của bài hát thường sử dụng thể thức của thơ - ngữ nghĩa không quan trọng bằng tính vần điệu. Do vậy, khi dịch nghĩa lời bài hát, nhiều khi sẽ cảm thấy khá tối nghĩa, điều đó sẽ gây khó cho người mới tập dịch.
Để xả hơi, hay là chọn một bài thật đơn giản về ngữ nghĩa, nhưng yêu cầu tập trung vào hành văn.
Huynh đề xuất dịch bức thơ sau:
Bối cảnh: Có một đôi bạn trẻ, cả hai đều mắc bệnh hiểm nghèo. Cô gái nhờ chàng trai viết điếu văn cho mình. Nhưng chàng trai lại đi trước. Trước khi đi, anh ta nhờ một người, một nhà văn, viết điếu văn cho người yêu. Nhà văn này lại là người mà cô gái ghét cay đắng. Đây là bức thư mà chàng trai gởi đến nhà văn.
Mr. Van Houten.
I'm a good person, but a shitty writer. You're a shitty person, but a good writer. I think we'd make a good team. I don't wanna ask you for any favors, but if you have the time - and from what I saw you had plenty - please fix this for me:
It's a eulogy for Hazel. She asked me to write one, and I'm trying, but I just... I could use a little flair. See, the thing is... we all wanna be remembered. But Hazel's different. Hazel knows the truth. She didn't want a million admirers, she just wanted one. And she got it. Maybe she wasn't loved widely, but she was loved deeply. And isn't that more than most of us get?
When Hazel was sick, I knew I was dying, but I didn't wanna say so. She was in the ICU when I snuck in for ten minutes and I just sat with her before I got caught. Her eyes were closed, her skin pale, but her hands were still her hands, still warm, and her nails were painted this dark blue black color, and... I just held them.
And I willed myself to imagine a world without us and what a worthless world that would be. She's so beautiful. You don't get tired of looking at her. You never worry if she's smarter than you, 'cause you know she is. She's funny without ever being mean. I love her. God, I love her, I'm so lucky to love her, Van Houten. You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world, but you do have a say in who hurts you. And I like my choices. I hope she likes hers. Okay, Hazel Grace?
I'm a good person, but a shitty writer. You're a shitty person, but a good writer. I think we'd make a good team. I don't wanna ask you for any favors, but if you have the time - and from what I saw you had plenty - please fix this for me:
It's a eulogy for Hazel. She asked me to write one, and I'm trying, but I just... I could use a little flair. See, the thing is... we all wanna be remembered. But Hazel's different. Hazel knows the truth. She didn't want a million admirers, she just wanted one. And she got it. Maybe she wasn't loved widely, but she was loved deeply. And isn't that more than most of us get?
When Hazel was sick, I knew I was dying, but I didn't wanna say so. She was in the ICU when I snuck in for ten minutes and I just sat with her before I got caught. Her eyes were closed, her skin pale, but her hands were still her hands, still warm, and her nails were painted this dark blue black color, and... I just held them.
And I willed myself to imagine a world without us and what a worthless world that would be. She's so beautiful. You don't get tired of looking at her. You never worry if she's smarter than you, 'cause you know she is. She's funny without ever being mean. I love her. God, I love her, I'm so lucky to love her, Van Houten. You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world, but you do have a say in who hurts you. And I like my choices. I hope she likes hers. Okay, Hazel Grace?
Thật vất vả.
